MY Idea 4:1 And Jesus, full of the Holy Spirit, returned from the Jordan and was led by the Spirit in the wilderness 2 for forty days, being tempted by the devil. And he ate nothing during those days. And when they were ended, he was hungry. 3 The devil said to him, “If you are the Son of God, command this stone to become bread.” 4 And Jesus answered him, “It is written, ‘Man shall not live by bread alone.’” 5 And the devil took him up and showed him all the kingdoms of the world in a moment of time, 6 and said to him, “To you I will give all this authority and their glory, for it has been delivered to me, and I give it to whom I will. 7 If you, then, will worship me, it will all be yours.” 8 And Jesus answered him, “It is written,
“‘You shall worship the Lord your God,
and him only shall you serve.’”9 And he took him to Jerusalem and set him on the pinnacle of the temple and said to him, “If you are the Son of God, throw yourself down from here, 10 for it is written,
“‘He will command his angels concerning you,
to guard you,’
11 and
“‘On their hands they will bear you up,
lest you strike your foot against a stone.’”12 And Jesus answered him, “It is said, ‘You shall not put the Lord your God to the test.’” 13 And when the devil had ended every temptation, he departed from him until an opportune time.
Jesus is Tempted, Jesus Is Tested in the Wilderness New Testament
(Luke 4:1-13)
My Story is based on a Bible story From Luke 4:1-13 Where Jesus is tempted by the devil. I am going to put Sci-Fi spin to it replacing Jesus with a lone Robot it is against his programming to accept anything what is not his, and replacing the Devil with spirit like alien creature. My story will also be set in the future and I will also replace Jerusalem with a unknown planet, I could also call his ship Jerusalem or Mary in my story the planet will be deserted the only two characters will be the Robot and the devil like figure watching him in the shadows.
In my story the Robot will crash land in his broken down ship to find food and help where he walks the planet for forty days without food, he starts to feel weak and his power levels fading. The alien figure will watch him in the distance for those forty days.
Like Jesus was offered three things by the devil the Robot will be offered three things by the alien also to show how weak human race are compared to his race.
The Robot will be tempted to restore its power levels what have faded by walking the planet, Power to control a nearby planet and to become human. The alien will try his hardest to try and tempted him while the robot will use all his power to turn these down.
The robot will look human and bleed like a human but have robotic Skelton.
In the future year 2034 a space shuttle named Bethlehem named after the birth place of Jesus Christ, is soaring across space within the space shuttle is a single being a robot who has human skin but robot Skelton under human flesh but like an human the robot bleeds, The robot is programmed not to accept anything what he does not own, The robot’s name is 469Q on the robot’s wrist is a battery what shows how much power he has lefted. You would not even be able to tell he is a robot if it was not for the battery on his arm and the way robot acts he acts with very little emotions.
The robots mission is to deliver alien artefacts to Earth. His shuttle is deep in space the nearest planets to him are Jerusalem and the ice planet of Hoth, A storm blows through space knocking the shuttle away from its path and the rubble hits the ship crashing the ship until it hits the planet Jerusalem.
The robot breaks out the shuttle to find it is now out of power so he cannot leave the planet or charge himself. The planet that he is on is deserted but he does not know that yet so he goes off to find parts for his ship or people to help not knowing a Spiritual demand looking alien is watching him in the distances.
So the Robot starts walk from his shuttle where he discovers that rubbles of an ancient city of Jerusalem, He carries on walking the planet as he walks he keeps an eye on the battery on his wrist to see his power levels every move makes to alien watches to see how strong the robot is. The Robot walks this planet for forty days with the alien always watching.
After forty days his battery level is down to one bar the robot now weaken falls down to his knees hitting the of the sand of the planet.
The alien appears in front of the Robot to tempted him with three things to try and prove that the robot is more than just how his programme is set.
The first thing the alien offers him is to restore his power to full levels, The robot turns this down saying “it against my programming my creator did not build me to take stuff that is not mine to take”.
Then the alien offers to repair his ship the robot repeats the same thing and finally the alien offers the chance for the robot to become human where the robot replies once more with the same thing.
The alien says “very well” and vanishes leaving the robot stranded on the planet. The alien flies off in distances. When the robot see a ship coming down.
A flash of the light happens it goes back where you find the robot alive and well now fully charged on a rescued ship.
Research My story is Jesus gets tempted is from (Luke 4:1-13) which is from the new testament, There has been movies based on the Bible and Jesus that include The Last Temptation of Christ (1988) what is directed by Martin Scorsese and stars Willem Dafoe showing the life of Jesus up to point where he put onto the cross and Passion of the Christ what goes through the last hours of Christ life. This is directed by Mel Gibson and the whole film is in Aramaic. But my story is when Jesus is tempted in story Jesus is fasting for Forty days and is approached by the devil.
The fellowship of the ring could be consider religious even JRR Toilken himself said that he did not mean for The Lord of the Rings to be about Christianity, letters directly states that he “intended it to be consonant with Christian thought and belief”
In my mind The Lord Of Rings is similar to my story you can say like Jesus is tempted by the Devil Frodo is tempted by the ring.
Questionnaire
- Have you ever read or heard of the Story Jesus tempted in wilderness?
- Have you ever seen any other various of the story above?
- What do you think of my version of this bible story?
- Does my story go well with the original version of the story?
- Do my characters work with story?
- Have you heard of the New Testament what this story is from?
- Do you think my version flows well as story?
- Does the Sci-Fi spin work on the bible spin?
- Do think it works that Jesus is replaced by a Robot and the devil is replaced by an Alien?
- Why don’t you think Jesus does not get tempted?
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