I had to do a present to my peers telling my idea of film and showing my film so they could give my feedback on how I presented my idea and how my edit came across this what they said.
Feedback
Quality of ideas presented
- I was well presented
- Clever idea to do a sequal be a pass project
- Follow up to previous film
- Could been better
- The Idea was especially liked he to compare his own work and potentials improve on an old piece
- little shaky and underscriptive
- Talked about his ideas and clearly got across what wanted to do
Clarity of information presented
- The information presented was clear and understable
- He was clear information he gave
- The information was very clear
Was the editing successful in Relation to project aim
- Film was short could been longer with more plot development
- I like how shows how you have improve
- In terms of what Aaron wanted to do I think he was fairly Successful
- The editions style was good and script worked. some tough cuts but overall gets the film . the film across although the ending was a bit abrompt.
- Good idea could have been large
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a link to my video
Link to music
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