Task 3. Negotiated Project

My Edit of my movie

My Film.

On the day of filming my location changed from shooting in canteen like a planned to shooting in the Student area because of to many people in canteen at the time and the short time I had to film, A problem I faced when filming I had no sound man so had place the sound recorder on the floor. so the sound was still muffled. This also came a problem while editing I had to make decision to use the sound the camera picked up or to use the recording the sound recorder picked up.   Another problem came was that the sound recorder kept picking up music from a near by class room. A group girls were sitting by the filming area and were worried that there voices were going to be pick up so as director I had to re unsure them it would not. and if the girls voices  was picked up I could cut of there voices out in the  editing process. The Filming process was difficult at times because me and my actors at deal with a lot people coming in and out of the near by class room in future I try book out a area before filming to try and make sure something like this does not happen again. One of the actors had terrible remembering there lines so I sat with the actors and had a couple of read through with them. I was trying make easy as possible  for them to remember. I want to do one wide shot of two actors going trough all there lines what was very difficult because actor was forgetting there lines I think found hard to remember those lines for that length  of filming. I think what happened was the actors only were given the script a hour before shooting so didn’t have that long to learn there lines in future I think if my film involves dialogue I will give my actors a longer time to learn lines. Another problem that came up during filming as the tripod was on angle what made some shots look wonky as director and camera operator I should of took more time setting up shots. As the director I felt filming was very rushed. in my script  the film was meant to shot in supermarket but because I could not find a right place to film a location what would suit a supermarket, The location was changed to a canteen and finally the location was changed to a Student area which will see in the final   edit. As Liam and Aaron walk down to there seats in my edit there names will go over them to introduce the characters and also as they walk strutter by kiss will start playing, Stutter will fade out as the title comes up. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mBY7a2x3A08 Kiss Strutter. When the women is shortly introduced to talk about her passion for the film Batman and Robin The Bane theme from the movie will begin and conutiune as she talks until her character leave. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mBY7a2x3A08 Bane theme. I do not own any of these tracks I only using them for this project and do not own the right to them or I will not be making any profit of them. It is poorly education based.

How I would improve. 

I have finished a rough cut for my edit I want to show a basic idea of my movie to show what my idea and what I wanted to achieve.

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As you see from this screen shot of the Movie, you see a placed tripod in the back ground. It oviously not meant to be there. iT only there very briefly and disappears. You are not meant see equipment in shots  what is obvious point and it effects continuity. what I could done to prevent this during filming I could made sure their was no equiment in shot when I was setting up. during edit I could of made the shot shorter cutting out the tripod all together. Making the shot shorter would not of effected my edit because I could cut to another shot sooner.

Some of my shots are over exposed on the actors skin tones I  could of turn down the apature  on the lens to reduce to amount of light coming into to the lens. I could of used a grey card to help expose for skin tones.

I think it was very nicely lit by the light in the corridor it made the film look very bright it gave the film a nice look to it what was good because my movie is comedy. I had no use of red heads at all.   If I had uses of extra lights I could used them to put light onto my actors.

I had no planning to film in the area so I didn,t just have the problem with on coming people coming into shot I also had sound coming from near by class room interfearing with my own sound equipment. I had no sound man operating the sound equipment. I had work the sound equipment and camera on my own.  The sound from the sound equipment and camera are both very quiet  and muffled. Because the the sound was a bit muffled and not very loud what I did was turn up the audio during the editing process.

What I noticed about edit was some of the shots went on too long this could make the audience viewing my film bored. Instead my filming getting right to the point or the next piece of dialogue it dragged on. What I could do to resolve this is cut down the scene use very fast cuts. keep it cuts moving at a fast pace.

My last titel is on screen to long to prevent I would Have cut the title down so it not on screen for to long.

For the shots what didn’t match up I could add a transistion in-inbetween Such as I could dip black, dip to white.

I think my film flows well the story is easy to understand, You know whats going on.

Screen Shots Of My Film. 

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Above Are Screen Prints of My Film For my negotiated Project. Like my Story board it shows my story in picture and show what my shots look like in my edit.

Task.2

Call Sheet

Example_Call_Sheet Aaron Jones– This Is my Call Sheet for my Project

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Shot list: Liam and Aaron The conversation

Shot.1 Establishing shot of the student area. Shot.2 Wide shot of Aaron and Liam walking down The student area. Shot.3 Close Up of Aaron and Liams legs as the walk down the corridor to get to there seats. Shot.4 wide shot of both them sitting down in there chairs. Shot.5 Two shot of Liam and Aaron. Shot.6 Mid Shot of Liam taking off his Jacket. Shot.7 Wide shot of Aaron Tom Speaking there lines. Shot.8 Close up Liam saying his line. Shot.9 wide shot of Aaron Saying his line. Shot.10 close up Liam saying his line. Shot.11 Two Shot Liam says his line. Shot.12 close Up Liam, Liam says his line. Shot.13  Close up Aaron Saying his line. Shot.14 wide shot.Liam saying his line. Shot.15 Close Up Liam shock on his face. Shot.16 wide shot women saying her line. Shot.17 Wide shot women walking off. Shot.18 Reaction shot of Liam and Aaron Shot.19 Two shot Aaron Says his line. Shot.20 Close up Liam says his line. Shot.21 close Up Aaron saying his line. Shot.22 mid shot of Liam putting his jacket back on and getting up. Shot.23 Wide Shot both Liam and Tom getting up. Shot.24 Wide shot of Liam and Aaron Leaving the shop Shot.25 Close up Aaron humming Howard the duck theme Shot.26 Close up Liam saying his line. Shot.27 Two shot of them both walking shot. 28 Wide shot Liam saying his line. Shot.29 Close up Aaron saying his line. Shot. 30 wide shot of both them walking out the building. Clothing  Liam character will be wearing ordinary clothing with a name tag I want Liam’s character to loo like a average shelf stacker. He will wear a plain white t shirt  and black trousers. Aaron will be wearing normal clothes a hoodie and jeans. he be wearing clothes because he is a normal person. The character was the women will be wearing very average clothing because her character also won’t be working in the shop so can wear her normal clothing. Location-  MY Location will be set in the College Canteen . Here are some pictures showing were my film will be shot. 11349959_1660048320896907_2003936717_n 11414484_1660048307563575_203981893_n11304332_1660048324230240_965240478_n11303549_1660048304230242_1664587487_n11354744_1660048187563587_110759977_n

During shooting the location was changed due to the canteen be to packed when it came to filming my project. 

Below are pictures are location I actually used- 

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Negotiated Project Task.1

Aaron And Liam- The conversation This my Script for my negotiated project My Idea For the Negotiated Project is to do a film which will be about Two friends dicussing movies the movies they talk about The new mad Max film Fury road,90s Captain America,90s Fantastic 4, Batman and Robin and Superman 4. I want the two main characters to be very normal guys I want the dialouge to be very natural flowing just an every day normal conversation. One of the characters will work in the shop  while the other wont work in the shop but will follow the other around. I will shortly add a third character a women who is a costumer visting the shop who will experience her love for the movie Batman and Robin The Film will end with the two friends leaving together both agreeing that the 90s Fantastic 4 is the best and saying download is in a couple of weeks. The end will show even though these two freiends have there disagraments on films at the end of the day they are still friends. My style will be based on the style of director Kevin Smith my aim will be to do one scene which will be like his films Clerks,Clerks 2 and mallrats. The Reason I choose Kevin Smith is because I am big fan of his films he has directed. For me he makes films for people like me they very nerdy films. I real big fan of Kevin Smith sense humour. Kevin Smith.

My main story will focus two orinary guys they are very nerdy I want it to be a very simple idea two guys dicussing films and stuff they enjoy. I named the two characters after myself and my friend Liam, The manner how these two act and interact with each other be very much how me and Liam act around each other anyway. Liam in real life works in a shop much like his own character he will playing. My character is unemployed much like my own character in the film.

What these two characters speak about in the film are based on some conversation we have actually talked about in real life. the conversation we talk about have just been mixed in. with in the conversation are characters will some times agree and some times disagree.  The women character is added a different appointive on a film.

https://aaronjoneswordpress.wordpress.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/05/kevinsmithredstate.jpg?w=300 Kevin Smith was born Kevin Patrick  Smith in Augast 2nd 1970 in New Jersey  his first movie  was Clerks 1994 Clerks was a film set in a conviences store.  Kevin Smith also appered in Clerks as The Silent Partner to Jay Silent Bob. Jay and Silent Bob also appered inKevin Smith’s other Movies Clerks,Mallrats,Chasing Amy and Jay and the silent Bob https://aaronjoneswordpress.wordpress.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/05/clerks.png?w=300 https://aaronjoneswordpress.wordpress.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/05/view_13_jay-and-silent-bob-strike-back_kevin-smith-and-jason-mewes_jpg.jpg?w=300 Kevin Smith Director History 1994 Clerks 1995 Mallrats 1997 Chasing Amy 1999 Dogma 2001 Jay and the silent Bob Strike Back 2004 Jersey Girl 2006 Clerks 2 2008 Zac and Miri Make a Porno 2010 Cop out 2011 Red State 2014 Tusk Kevin Smith plans to sequel to his 1995 film Mallrats what will come out in 2016 what will be called Mallbrats. He also plans second sequel to clerks 1 and 2 called Clerks 3. Kevin Smith does Q and A his largest Q and A was at count basis theatre in Red Bank which sold out completly which went on at 8pm and finished at 3am this Q and A shows for me that Kevin Smith is a director who is very much there for his fans. Clerks  Clerks was released in 1994 the plot of Clerks is a day in life of Dante as he passes his day working at the convencies Store as him and his friend Randal discusses  Movies and piss off the cousomers. Clerks was shot in Black and white. The film stars Brian o Halloran,Jeff Anderson and Jason Mewes and Kevin Smith as Jay and The silent Bob. “I Wasn’t supposed to Be Here today” Dante  Hicks a quote from Clerks.

Mallrats  https://aaronjoneswordpress.wordpress.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/05/mallrats.jpg?w=200 Mallrats was made  in 1995 the plot of Mallrats after two friends are dumped by their girlfriends the spend time in the Mall. Mallrats stars Jeremy London,Jason Lee,Claire Forlani,Ben Affleck along with others.Jason Mewes and Kevin Smith reprised there roles as Jay and The Silent Bob in this. Characters and Cast  Shelf stacker The Shelf Stacker is a Staff member in a super market who stacks the shelf. He is bored with life his only escape is films. He knows everything about films. one day his friend comes in a film argument starts. The Friend. His friend his enployed has no hope in life. He can not get a job all he does all hang around the shop all day. The Women all the women is in the film is cousomer shopping in the shop who has a passion for the film Batman and Robin. He character shortly goes. Cast  Shelf Stacker/Liam Played by Liam Hagan Friend/Aaron played by Aaron Jones Women Played by Chelsea Burgin